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Just one of my favorite poems that I wrote

Posted by NemoX - March 14th, 2008


Loneliness

Loneliness, that is what I feel
I'm alone in a world of lies,
a world of hate, a real living hell.
Money's got us on its evil spell,
people care only about themselves
----
Clouded minds and blackened hearts
are all my eyes can ever see
Compasion, love, honor and truth
are words no longer known or used
The few pure souls that keep intact
are always mocked, seen as losers or laughed at
----
I see these things, they make me sick
take away my spirit, my will to live.
I wonder if someone else knows how it feels,
but then again, demons cannot feel
----
Even when I'm swallowed by the joyfull crowds,
the thunderous silence is too loud
For they don't notice I'm around
not in the morning, nor at dawn
----
But wait! there is still hope
we still can find the missing force
that will save us from the worse
after all, demons were once angels,
why can't we go back to our good nature
Redeem yourselves and be like angels
don't be too proud about your nation
----
Loneliness, that is what I feel
lonely is my world
lonely is my quest
I wish I could just rest
from this neverending test
----
This is what life is,
a huge big joke we have to live
But come to think of it this joke,
is not that bad, you soon shall see
----
Nevermind the wrongs before you,
never let the devil fool you.
Love yourself and love the world
'cause this is where angels will fall
----
There is no hell other than Earth
break out free just like a bird
and keep in mind that with every birth
another soul will join your pain
----
Lonely souls, one by one,
will add up to a joyful crowd
and that'll fullfil satan's desire,
your body and soul burned in a fire.

Kibian "NemoX" Chavarria


Comments

Not bad!

Now let me try!
*ahem*,

Fish-fingers.
============

Golden breadcrumbs,
To this I succumb,
And within does hide,
The processed fillet inside.

On the box where I read,
A promise- well kept,
To better ones self,
Oils of Omega twelve.

Not only delicious
But also nutritious!
On my breath the stench lingers
Memories of fish fingers.

I hope it helps!

I lol'ed.

thanks for sharing, I liked it :)

3rd stanza first line - these
not this
itd flow better + its proper english that way :o
also: bleh, friends
also also: read the entire thread about your memoirs of mc donalds x.x
but i dont post on the forums... like, ever (well rarely)

Thanks for spotting the typo, I seem to make lots of those. I do know that it's supposed to be "these" rather than this, but meh, I'll change it later. Also, thanks for reading Memoirs, readers are always welcome :)

you didnt answer the friends part :s
friends?
...or else ill castrate you
lol ^.^

friends it is! :)

Nice Poem, Kibian!

thanks :)

Very good, quality poem!

thank you, I love writtng, though these kinds of poem I only write when depresed (naturally), which hasn't happened a lot lately

ERROR, ERROR. TOO DEEP, CANNOT COMPREHEND!!!

BEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEP

nice poem