I too believe this should be Turd of the week :)
The warning at the beggining of the flash is a good touch considering a lot of people do not bother to read the author's comments half the time.
As for the animation itself, it is "bad" on purpose, which in turn makes it good. There is a fine line between silly and funny, and stupid and retarded. This one kept nicely to the better side of that line. Good job.
I am off to see the some more of your work, since I can't really say anything to improve the flash because it was bad on purpose, but nonetheless you deserve a good score just for public service anouncement :)
Good luck with TotW :)
Thankyou very much.
But Turd of the Week isn't really a good thing ;D
Yeah, it's bad on purpose but I tried not to make it retarded.
Also, I know I'm no super animator, but I do like to avoide stick figures if I can ;D
Thanks for the review.
very smooth animetion, you had a good storyline, and a kickass bg music.
only thing was that the dialogues go a little too fast at times, I barely had time to keep up.
other than that, I loved it, make more like this, we need quality submissions here :)
...for a stick short. just because it is a stick movie and there are a lot of assholes out there, this might get blammed, but I don't think it should.
it is very simple, yet it has some charm to it. just work on your drawing and think of a plot next time and maybe make a longer movie, but one step at a time. loved the music, it was catchy :)
It wasn't supposed to have a plot. It was just a simple little gag. Nothing more, nothing less. If you liked the music, you should check out the soundtrack to the movie "Crumb". It's got lots of fun catchy tunes like that in it.
Nice! siento no haber podido estar aqui para cuando aun esaba en judgment, pero si la vi el dia de release :)
me gusto, aunque no e visto todas las peliculas de Jason (y las que e visto fue hace un par de años) entendi la mayoria del humor, y lo qeu no entendia en que estaba basado aun era gracioso.
anyway, felicidades, y gracias por al fin honrarnos con esta pelicula tan esperada :) sigue asi :)
nice job :)
the music created a nice enviroment, and it was quite funny how he piled up so many karma ghosts after going to the mall, among other things. really wel thought, and I speciay liked the fact that there where no real dialogues, just actions, gestures and such, takes a lot more creativity to think up these kind of movies without all that, is much more simpler but much more complicated to get a point across or make it funny, for this reason you deserve a 5, every bit of it, keep up the good job.
My favorite type of flash is music videos and sprites, and you put them toghether quite nicely, and although I HATE the song, I gotta give it to you because it is still well done.
animation was smooth, and it just brings back memories just watching some of the characters.
can't really say anything I haven't said before, just plain good, I love when people make music videos because you learn a lot about them by how and what they interpret a song. Keep up the good work, and make haste for WTH Men ep. 7!
I'm going as fast as I can!!!
Thanks for your support NemoX, I really apreciate it :)
Happy anniversary LG!
Me encanto lo que hicieron chicos!
Graficos: geniales, el hecho de que son originales los dibujos y la forma en que interactuan el uno con el otro los hace geniales.
Sonido: bueno, el no ser una pieza original le quita puntos, pero al ser una buena seleccion ambiental le suma, asi que les doy un 8 :)
Interactividad: es un video musical, no hay especio para interactividad o si? sin embargo si hay un poco de interactividad al inicio y al final, eso siempre cuenta :)
Estilo: un 10 por todo lo alto! muy original la forma en que lo pusieron todo junto, y como trabajaron en equipo para hacerlo :)
Violencia: no hay casi nada violento...excepto por la violencia emocional en ciertos casos, por eso el 1
Humor: la animacion no estaba destinada a ser humoristica, por ello el bajo score en esta categoria, pero si hubo un poco de ello en la seccion de nacho-gs.
General: un 10, como ya dije, un excelente trabajo de grupo, sigan asi!
I loved what you did guys!
Graphics: awesome, the fact that they are al original drawings and the way they interact with each other makes them great.
Sound: well, because it is not an original piece takes points away, but because it is a good choice for ambience it add some points, so I gave you an 8 :)
Interactivity: it is a musical video, so there is no space for interactivity right? however there was a little at the beggining and at the end, and that always counts :)
Style: a 10 all the way! very original the way you put it all together, and how you worked as a team to do it :)
Violence: there is almost nothing violent...except for emotional violence in some parts, that's why you get a 1 here.
Humor: the movie was not meant to be funny, therefore the low score in this category, but there was a little after all in nacho-gs's part.
Overal: a 10, like I already said, it was a great job guys, keep it up!
I loved it!
It showed exactly what you guys said it would: the variety of talent and styles there is in Newgrounds, you are all doing an amazing job guys! keep it up!
We, your fans, will be here waiting for all your works.
Keep on Spreading the love!
I'm happy to see you drop by on the debut, NemoX.
We'll spread the love like NG Jam on toast ;)
looks good so far
I say finish it, it has some potential. As others have said before, work on the text so it's easier to read, and make the sound start a little earlier, other than that, it's good.
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